Friday, June 28, 2019
all about me
My name is Carlos . I am 11. I have a mum and a dad and my brother is called Jacob and a sister called Aline. I have no pets but I love cats.
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Hi Carlos
ReplyDeleteI liked the cat, I have 3 cats. Maybe next you could have capital letters.
Could you please check out my blog. Brandon
Kia ora my name is Haemo. This is amazing because I love cats very much too.
ReplyDeleteDid you know cat is one of my favorite pet. Next time, you could create one about dog. Why did you choose your topic?
Kia ora my name is Mason from Marshland school This amazing because i love cats too. And id you know i have a cat called Lola and Louie.
ReplyDeleteNext time, you could add more writing on your script. Added a question?
Why did you choose that topic?
Kia ora my name is Angelica and I am from Marshland school
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because I love cats
Did you know i have a cat too. Its name “COCO”
Next time, you could add more detail to your description.
Next time you could say what activities you did?
Nice thinking !!
ReplyDeleteI also have no pets and I do like cats !!
Next time you could put a bit more about yourself
hello its me your brother from Belfast. i love it! i love cats so much.i love how the cat has a lion`s main.it reminds me of simba from the lion.maybe next time you could put a little little bit about yourself and your family.only a little bit.
ReplyDeleteHello Carlos
ReplyDeleteit`s your brothers friend from room 14 I liked your cat with a mane it was cute. but next you should put you and Jacob.
from Tama
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ReplyDeleteHi Carlos,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put in how you like cats. It reminds me when I saw the real life lion king show in Australia. Maybe next time you could put in a little bit more info about your family but other than that it's really good.
Sincerely Kaleb
Hey Carlos
ReplyDeletei like your image did you even think about doing one about a dog
next time you could put more info about yourself we all would like to know more about you.
by Lucy.
Hi carlos this is very cool i love how you added you have a brother. maybe next time you could add a little bit more thought into it.
ReplyDeleteHi Carlos
ReplyDeleteI love cats too! The pic was really cool. Maybe next time could you tell us a bit more about yourself.
Great job from Emma.
I liked the way you Added your favourite animal . Did you think about
ReplyDeleteAdded Colour why do you like cats from Rihana
kia ora carlos i liked the way you added your name in the text. did you think about the size of the text maybe you could add more detail.
ReplyDeleteHi carlos It's Tiare I love cats as well I like the image it's cute.
ReplyDeleteBut maybe you could add more information so that people know more about you and maybe add different pictures but other than that it's cool!
Hi carlos,
ReplyDeleteI really like all the things you told me about you.
Did you think about putting more pictures in.
Maybe next time you can put mre about you in.
Kind regards Leandri
DeleteHi Carlos
ReplyDeleteLike when you find the pictures funny.
Did you know it looked like a lion?
Next time you could have put spots on then it looked like a Leopard.
Hi Carlos,
ReplyDeleteI love how cute the photo looks and how you said things about you.
Next time you could think about doing more information.
From Micki
HI Carlos!
ReplyDeleteThat picture is really cute it kinda looks like a lion.
Next time you could tell us more about yourself.
From Chloe